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I really enjoyed how you gave us vivid images of what the narrator was thinking. When you compared her thoughts to that of a clock, was really enjoyable. The story was also funny. Hopefully for the next serial we get to know more about Amar.
Your story is coming out really great. It is funny which is sometimes hard today. I feel like Ms. Monet is very relatable. I would like to see a little more dialogue with other characters or at least more between Amar and Miss Monet. Other than that, it’s an interesting story. I’m really enjoying it. I hope the next installment will introduce a bigger problem.
I loved the beginning of the story. I felt as if the character was speaking directly to me. However I think that the story still needs to develop a bit more. Overall I really enjoyed it!
September 24, 2008 at 9:10 pm |
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November 10, 2008 at 12:37 am |
I really enjoyed how you gave us vivid images of what the narrator was thinking. When you compared her thoughts to that of a clock, was really enjoyable. The story was also funny. Hopefully for the next serial we get to know more about Amar.
-Aracely
November 13, 2008 at 9:10 am |
Your story is coming out really great. It is funny which is sometimes hard today. I feel like Ms. Monet is very relatable. I would like to see a little more dialogue with other characters or at least more between Amar and Miss Monet. Other than that, it’s an interesting story. I’m really enjoying it. I hope the next installment will introduce a bigger problem.
November 14, 2008 at 11:47 pm |
I loved the beginning of the story. I felt as if the character was speaking directly to me. However I think that the story still needs to develop a bit more. Overall I really enjoyed it!